gtgrouch posted a comment on Friday 8th August 2014 12:54pm for The Last Alchemist
Like I said before: "Intense!"
ProfessorBinns posted a comment on Sunday 8th January 2012 7:33pm for The Last Alchemist
Really gripping, marvelous stuff. I have just read it all the way to this point, so I review the whole: The first half is great action and character development and interplay, and really some of the best of the type; the second half is not the sort of thing that I usually give much time to, but you have made a compelling story of magic metaphysics without losing sight of the emotional core that made the first part so good. Your prose is first rate, as well. Thank you!
in-kinsfire posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2012 7:22pm for The Last Alchemist
Absolutely wonderful. One last once.
chuckmcdaniels posted a comment on Saturday 31st December 2011 12:36pm for The Last Alchemist
A masterful last twist there, with Siggy sacrificing herself to ensure that the ritual would work! I also really enjoyed the words spoken by all there as they gave their talismans to the ritual. Looking forward to see how you wrapped it all up!
Jonathan Langford posted a comment on Saturday 31st December 2011 11:25am for The Last Alchemist
A truly excellent story, both imaginative and well-plotted. And an excellent chapter.
Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Saturday 31st December 2011 10:44am for The Last Alchemist
I have to admit, this was one of my favorites stories on this site. However, I do not recall having read the last several chapters, only the so-called alternate ending where Harry meets the helicopter pilot (Meg Fairbanks?). That said, this resolution of Hermione's return was impressive and, curiously enough, far more satisfying. Well done.
that1 posted a comment on Saturday 31st December 2011 4:31am for The Last Alchemist
Wow! That was some chapter.
Sarah5 posted a comment on Saturday 31st December 2011 1:47am for The Last Alchemist
At Last Hermione appears did it really succeed or not I look forward to your next chapter.