Harry Potter and the Years of Rebellion
From the notes: The Most Honourable and Courageous House of Potter [SPOILERS]
By Mike [FP]
Reviews
ginsengh posted a comment on Saturday 7th July 2012 8:41pm for From the notes: The Most Honourable and Courageous House of Potter [SPOILERS]
I remembered you updating some things a few months ago on the other site so I decided to come take a look here to see if YoR might have received an update. Glad to see that I wasn't disappointed. It may not be the continuation of one of the best stories I've ever read (to include both fan-fiction and published work), but it does at least offer some sort of closure to the events that were never posted.
I'll continue to hope that you find the motiviation to truly finish this story in a way you had originally intended at some point. Until then though I thank you for giving us readers a chance to experience the amazing ride that was YoR.
geeves posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2012 6:53am for From the notes: The Most Honourable and Courageous House of Potter [SPOILERS]
FP - good stuff as always. I'm sad that this story may never be finished, but I am happy that The Last Horcrux has seen closure.
@Denya - "At the time you leave the story, Harry as little to no control over the magic he can access when he's angry - did you have any idea how that was going to happen? And presumably it would play a big part in Voldie's defeat."
I think Harry's journey or YoR may be somewhat answered by the "epilogue" chapters of The Last Horcrux. In YoR Harry's an uncontrolled / undisciplined mess fueled by anger, guilt and pain that enhances his usage of magic and sends him on a journey of self-discovery and knowledge as to what has happened to him and how he can tool it to defeat Voldemort. In support Hermione is trying to discover what happened on the night of Godric's Hollow and if I remember correctly it was a very rune & arithmacy-based research.
In The Last Horcrux, without spoiling I hope, Harry's journey is a pursuit of knowledge to deal with the aftermath of his final battle with Voldemort to rectify what happens to him. Harry goes on the same journey as Voldemort did (in cannon) in pursuit of knowledge and magic though in the opposite direction. He also takes on Hermione's project from YoR inadvertantly (though I'm sure there would be some differences) about what happened at Godric's Hollow.
Full_Pensieve replied:
Significant differences, actually. There are no horcruces in Years of Rebellion, period. The story as it stands was outlined weeks after the publication of Order of the Phoenix and mostly written before the publication of Half Blood Prince.
As such, it was created in the midst of enormous fan speculation about the nature of Voldemort's continued survival, the meaning of the prophecy and the connection between Voldemort and Harry. Horcruces bother me on a fundamental level - the Icelandic mages in Last Horcrux speak for my functional and philosophical problems with the concept.
I started by using a then-popular hypothesis as a starting point: the Changeling hypothesis, which was popularized via the Red Hen collection of essays. There's still a description of it to be had, though the writer has done some post-hoc reconsidering: http://www.redhen-publications.com/changeling.html. Reading the Red Hen essay won't give you the exact answer re: YoR, but it's a big fat clue. :)
I was also heavily influenced by the long list of essays presented at the HP Lexicon: http://www.hp-lexicon.org/essays/essay-index.html. I read all of them through 7/2003 before developing the original outline, and you'll find influences from them through 2006.
Finally, it's important to know that I saw classical alchemy as an extraordinarily important element in interpreting the Harry Potter series. As it turned out, it was a modestly useful element in understanding the final canon, but not nearly as consistent a thread as I thought it was. In YoR, it matters. A lot.
Take care,
Mike [FP]
lwj2 posted a comment on Friday 18th May 2012 8:26pm for From the notes: The Most Honourable and Courageous House of Potter [SPOILERS]
I've enjoyed this, I do hope you'll pick it up again.
You've got a scope and depth to this I rarely see, whether in fanfic or in an original work.
Thanks for writing and sharing this.
amsev posted a comment on Wednesday 18th April 2012 9:26pm for From the notes: The Most Honourable and Courageous House of Potter [SPOILERS]
Awesome is a pale and anemic word to describe this story. I hope you do, upon occasion, update this story, simply because it is very well written and a compelling read.
On the other hand, since you've been laboring over this story since 2003.....
Thank you for writing!
Denya posted a comment on Wednesday 11th April 2012 5:26am for From the notes: The Most Honourable and Courageous House of Potter [SPOILERS]
Dear Mike (FP),
Seeing you had posted on YoR for the first time in a long time, I went back and re-read it. What a fantastic story it is! Plots & sub-plots. All kinds of interesting magic making - from the idea of 13 (Hero & companions); to the 'compact families & old magic; to Hermione's project (which will turn the Wizarding world upside down); to whatever is up with Detheridge; to the 'Hebrew' magics; to the use of Dreaming in healing... I could go on.
I won't ask if you're planning more posts of notes, since it's a bit silly to ask in a review... But I will say that something I both love to read and admire from an author of an abandoned piece (especially something as fine as this one) is an idea of where they were going with the loose ends.
Things I'd love to know (or at least have an idea of where you going):
At the time you leave the story, Harry as little to no control over the magic he can access when he's angry - did you have any idea how that was going to happen? And presumably it would play a big part in Voldie's defeat.
What *is* the result of Hermione's project?
What further role did you have in mind for the Goblins? Especially Hermione being Saataja?
Obviously, from the most recent post, whatever Harry & Heather had is gone, in favour of Hermione. Does Heather heal? Does she recover that magical voice of hers?
Did you have any idea of how the 'old magics' will play into the story. (I love the whole MacIlvane connection - and Harry's response to the betrothal contract).
What happens to Nicola? Does Harry take over her care? (She has to live in a very expensive prision - so who else). By the by, I also loved her character... And found it a believable explanation for why Covelli & McLeash would split.
Who is the mad butcher? (I'm sure you had someone in mind).
What is the curse that the old-old crowd is talking about? (Again, I'm sure you had something in mind). I also loved the overheard conversation - the idea that each of them had some elixer of life as a gift from Flamel - and the endless bickering with Croaker. de M is just an inspired character!
What *is* going on with Detheridge?
Did you have an idea of who the complete 'Knights of St. Peter' would be? Did you plan on his teachers (Bill, Tonks, Shaklebolt, Flitwick) being part of it, or part of the last battle, or not at all? The same question for the old-old crowd - de M makes it clear this is his last fight, which implies he plans to be part of it, but obviously not part of Harry's 13.
I think all the questions give you an idea of just how enthralled I was with the story. It's just brilliant. Thank you for writing it and sharing it.
I suppose, to be fair, I should add some "constructive criticism". My least favourite bit was Lockheart's obliviation of Heather. That really felt like a deus ex machina solution for the basic conflict through the first - well many - chapters. Harry has something real with Heather. He develops something real with Hermione. But the two girls give him very different things - and not just love vs. lust. Heather can understand the pressures of fame at a young age - the isolation involved, the madness of press, fans, manipulators. She also has a similar childhood in many ways. I won't go into what Hermione gives him - that's pretty obvious. But I think just taking Heather out of the conflict via Lockheart and her no long being/remembering herself was a bit too easy.
In any case, I loved the story on re-read... And if you wanted to post some of those answers, I would love it.
Again, thanks for writing!
Denya
DenyaEva@gmail.com
Bobsama posted a comment on Sunday 2nd November 2014 8:47am for From the notes: The Most Honourable and Courageous House of Potter [SPOILERS]
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