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Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 2:17am for Moving On

You went and switched the make of broomsticks when you updated. Ron doesn't HAVE a Firebolt; he has a Nimbus 2100-R, according to the birthday chapter...

Otherwise, I've enjoyed reading how the updates have changed the original story...

Full_Pensieve replied:

Thanks for the catch - that shouldn't have gotten by.  Same problem in the following chapter, as well.  I *think* I caught all the references now.

Cheers,

Mike [FP]

 

GryffindorDragon posted a comment on Friday 17th August 2007 5:18am for Moving On

It seems some things have changed from earlier chapters. Chap. 8 places Grangers' home on the outskirts of Winchester, but here they're in Belgravia. And at the end of chapter 7 Harry's party is clearly at the Shrieking Shack, but subsequent chapters mention the Burrow. Are those hold-overs from the original version?

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Thursday 9th August 2007 3:21am for Moving On

Great part here, the chat with Dumbledore, Ron and Harry talking with each other like best buds, and Remus letting his paternal instincts help him out, just great stuff here.

Kinsfire posted a comment on Thursday 9th August 2007 2:55am for Moving On

Ouch. Seeing the comment that Remus would be there as a father for as long as Harry wanted, and knowing what's coming ...