MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Tuesday 25th September 2007 10:27am for The Typhoon Tycoon

Wow, what a chapter.

Nicola was a complete and utter surprise and MacLeish a pleasant one.

I can see both Covelli's and his positions on Nicola and how that could kill any marriage.

Wow.

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Mrs. Greengrass rolled her eyes. "Who would be caught dead in a short-sleeved robe?"
"Someone with nothing to hide, of course," Covelli said in a voice cold as ice.
-Made me laugh and like Covelli more.

GryffindorDragon posted a comment on Tuesday 25th September 2007 2:48am for The Typhoon Tycoon

'Stop sniffin' around and pick a trail!' -- Harry, he means choose one crotch to sniff at, Hermione's or Heather's.
Oh, poor Nicola. I can see both MacLeish's and Covelli's points of view. What a terrible dilemma! But I think the pureblood perspective is hogwash, of course!

Thiago Krause posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 12:05pm for The Typhoon Tycoon

I've read the others reviews and saw that you sometimes answer them. So, I'll raise a few things that crossed my mind when re-reading your story:

The importance of the Bible and religion in the magical world. Rowling never touches it, obviously, but you've treaded around the topic, though I don't think I grasped all the significance involved.

I do miss Snape in your story. I like the grease bastard, a lot, and I've read "The Enemy Within" and "The Chained Souls", in Sugar Quill, with the best depicted Snape I've read (much better than the canon one) and it prompted me to wonder why he appears so few in your story. I always felt your writing style would be excellent to depict Snape with all his wit and ambiguities.

I think I'll try to post at your forum later.

Thiago Krause posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 11:53am for The Typhoon Tycoon

Wow, I've just re-read your story after reading it for the first time three years ago. I've followed the first version, but I've never looked at Redux till now. I intended to read it just after you've finished it, but I couldn't resist the new chapter and read it all in the last two days. I've always prefered stories with a strong canon feeling in the plot and in the writing, but I nevertheless regard your story in a very high standing and I do appreciate your dystopic view, though I disagree with your interpretations of the canon from time to time. I, however, like "YoR" because it does masterly explores the possibilities created by Rowling in a completely different perspective and style.

trailmix posted a comment on Sunday 23rd September 2007 4:16am for The Typhoon Tycoon

Detheridge’s approach to Harry is a welcome change compared to Dumbledore, who coddles him and gives him the runaround then lies with little or no reservations. And what’s up with him zoning out every once in a while?

So, Detheridge has given Hermione an ultimatum. I wonder how she’s going to deal with that. I couldn’t imagine it would be easy for her. And I also hope we find out the significance of Hermione being called Saattaja by the goblins.

I wasn’t expecting Harry to ask Covelli. That was a good move by Harry and shows that he is stepping up to his role and showing signs of maturity.

The introduction of Macleish and his agenda was not how I imagined it would be. He could be a worthwhile ally but the addition of Nicola becomes problematic . She’s a wild card that could either help or hinder Harry’s cause if he accepts Macleish’s support. Still, there are too many layers for it to be that clear cut.

Why did Nicola ended up staying with Macleish rather than Covelli, given that Covelli is a psychiatrist and can better look after her mental well being. But, Macleish seems more capable of protecting her more from the wizarding world’s prejudices. Was it a mutual agreement?

A very loaded chapter. It answers a lot of questions and still poses more. This is getting better, if that’s even possible. ;)

Pamela St Vines posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 9:13pm for The Typhoon Tycoon

I never read the earlier version of YoR so I don't know how the Redux compares to the original, but this is an amazingly well written story. Your characters have a very "real" feel to them. No one is too perfect and no one is evil personified--except maybe Voldemort and that's as it should be. I always hate waiting for the next chapter when I'm reading a work in progress, but I can use the time to think through this one. I never saw it coming but Nicola explains a lot about her father. Thanks for a great fic. In the words of Oliver Twist, "Please,sir, I want some more."

ZanyMuggle posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 3:52pm for The Typhoon Tycoon

Wow. You just find those tough issues and dive right in, don't you Mike? Nicely done. You introduced the idea of a mentally challenged witch, all of the complications, and many of the ramifications, and then leave it open-ended, for the reader to digest. I honest don't think I've seen a better, more professionally written, more powerful ending to a chapter in any fiction I've read in several years.

Wow.

fanfichelps posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 9:15am for The Typhoon Tycoon

Thanks for this.

Would Covelli not only do it again, but do it now?

Somehow I had gotten the idea that Nicola and Heather were friends and Nicola had gotten an initial message to Harry after the "forced" separation. But that doesn't seem plausible now. I'll have to go back and see where I messed up.

Keep smiling, and I look forward to whatever else may come.

Chloe Broefan posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 2:56am for The Typhoon Tycoon

Excellent chapter. It really made my weekend when I saw you'd updated. I'm glad Harry's letting go of Heather, but I'd love to read more Harry and Hermione interaction.

john2 posted a comment on Saturday 22nd September 2007 2:09am for The Typhoon Tycoon

Lovely, layered and nuanced.

The notion of Nicola being a key motivation for MacLeish - amazing, and very humanizing. Nicola being the rock upon which Covelli and MacLeish's marriage foundered, very deep.

When we had the episode with Nicola, I was remembering another fan-fic in which Gred and Forge had enchanted teddy-bears, including a Beary Potter, who was saying thinks like "Only I can kill Voldemort" and "Everything's my fault, I'm sorry." I'm fairly certain you never read that story, but that's what I was thinking of.

Another lovely chapter - thanks, and may there be more this year!

J

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 11:07pm for The Typhoon Tycoon

Really good part here, and loved the way things went with this young lady, as well as the art of the battle with "Harry" and the dragon, and I look forward to what this will mean for Harry and his friends in the future.

jim5 posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 6:05pm for The Typhoon Tycoon

Love the story and sorry to say that I haven't left a review before now, but there is one thing that I have to say....

you are a dog!!..lol I was going to use renderings in my story, and you beat me to it...dang it!!

Are you a poser user or maybe a daz? either way if you are in need of something let me know.

Full_Pensieve replied:

Actually, I started using renderings for the original Years of Rebellion in 2003, in the Poser 5 days.   I use Poser 7 now, and Corel Photo-Paint 12 for postwork when I'm being a little more serious about it.   I use Cararra 5 for landscape backgrounds but have never been a  really committed user.   Until recently I had a number of renders posted at the FFA Forum but ran low on open file space.   I'll probably add back some of them over time, for both YoR and Last Horcrux.

Thanks for the review!

Woof-woof,

Mike [FP]

anonymous5 posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 12:03pm for The Typhoon Tycoon

You have just turned this story up to eleven. Now my breath will be that much more bated while waiting for the next installment. Curses! Kudos! At this point it's ALL THE SAME!!

FenrisWolf posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 10:11am for The Typhoon Tycoon

So happy to see a new chapter on this, and one that fills in so much backstory!

VERY interesting plotline with Nicola; one can see the rational side of Lucia that makes her a goo phsycologist warring with her emotional side. At the same time the layered motivations of MacLeish's push for integration are finally revealed, as well as the current tragedy that is Nicola, as well as the potential threat she represents. And for the first time Harry has met someone as manipulative as Dumbledore, whose ultimate goals oppose both the headmaster and Voldemort.

I would have liked to hear more about why Covelli was so opposed to the idea of Hermione attending the Hunt; is it just because of her still fragile nature, or is there more involved? Hopefully that will be revealed in more detail in the future.

Whatever else might be said, YoR is never boring! (Wonder what MacLeish's reaction will be to an angry werewolf as Heather's father?)

snoopmary posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 9:53am for The Typhoon Tycoon

I love the changes you've made. I was totally addicted to the original tale, but I really, really love the way the story's progressing.

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 9:39am for The Typhoon Tycoon

What an interesting development, I've suspected for a while that Keith MacLeish would be more like able than indicated, but I never expected this. I certainly see his side of things, but I can see Lucia's side as well. Honestly, I'm not certain she's wrong, but I'm fairly certain I couldn't bring my self to do in Nicola unless she was in the act of hurting someone. I certainly understand MacLeish's over all motives, and suspect that Harry might ally with him in general. I could see some problems coming from visiting Nicola if she decides that she'd rather Harry stay for a while. Brilliant chapter, thank you.

Andrew Niehaus posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 9:03am for The Typhoon Tycoon

You know,I've been on the border over this MacLeish character,wether or not he is good or evil...as of now, I'm liking him. He's willing to do whatever it takes to usher in a brave new world,by any mean necesary. Kind of like Magneto.

As for the picture- ee-gads, that's both brilliant and disturbing.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 7:11am for The Typhoon Tycoon

what a way to present the real moral dilemma - is it allowable to kill someone because of what they MIGHT do??? The concept of prior restrain caused a heated discussion with one of my ecclesiatical (spelling?) leaders just this morning.

thanks for your excellent story - I will be thinking long and hard about this chapter and borrowing your example as an illustration for many conversations.

warmest regards

Full_Pensieve replied:

Of course there's the added wrinkle of a secret society and its self-protection.   That part in particular fascinates me.   To what lengths would the Secrecy Statute require a society to go?   Anyone who went around displaying magic willy-nilly would be jailed for certain; what do you do with someone who can't help it?

Cheers,

Mike [FP]

Cu posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 7:04am for The Typhoon Tycoon

A little nitpicking: AFAIK Lancelot was Arthur's knight, not his father Uther's.

Glad to see YoR going on. New characters, new subplots... Cheers!

Full_Pensieve replied:

And you're right of course - can't believe I missed that!

Cheers,

Mike [FP]

Amamama posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 7:01am for The Typhoon Tycoon

Oooh, interesting! You're beginning to touch upon some very fascinating subjects. I sure look forward to the next installment!