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dan26 posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2011 12:21am

This last sentence is very life altering it sounds like to me anyway

Tumshie posted a comment on Sunday 6th November 2011 9:09am

This is the first time I've read this story and I have to say that I think you've created a wonderful universe.

As someone who moved house after 17 years in one place I wish you well for your move

Tolias posted a comment on Friday 4th November 2011 3:39am

What? Fuck!
MOAR

asap

Shane! posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd November 2011 6:34am

This remains a wonderful story. I'm really enjoying reading the chapters as they are posted and am looking forward to finally reading the second half of the second ending.
I do wonder about one change in this chapter. In the previous version Ginny declared her love to Harry and then said that she loves him even if he is sleeping with Hermione. Here you've added that perhaps she has fallen out of love with Harry and has met somebody else, plus sentences about how Ron and Hermione love one another. I don't understand what the goal of these changes are. The concise simplicity of her declaration (previous version) was powerful; I think her rambling (current version) is less powerful. What is the point of her emphasis of the relationship between Ron and Hermione?
I do like that you added material from the next chapter (previous version) to this chapter, since it makes sense to end with their arrival at Hogwarts.
Thanks for writing and posting and re-posting.
I hope that after you've finished with this story more material from YoR will be posted.
Best wishes.

Patches posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd November 2011 1:45am

Well, it took them long enough to find the dagger but it was worth it because they destroyed the Grimoire. Now Harry has a way to destroy the other Horcruces. What happened to Gryffindor's sword? I'm glad in a way that Dumbledore's portrait nolonger exists. He did give them some good advice though. It was poorly presented but that is the way that Dumbledore liked to do things. Made it a lot harder than it would have been otherwise. I look forward to more of this story. I want to know what happened to Hermione when Harry destroyed the Grimoire. pms

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 1st November 2011 12:35pm

Thank goodness. At least Harry has saved Hermione. Ginny is upset because she is beginning to see that Harry is now more attached to Hermione. Harry is exhausted. At least there are others who care about Harry and Hermione there. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Monday 31st October 2011 1:03am

I read this long ago when you started. I look forward to seeting the complete story. Harry is finally opening up to Hermione and he is finally getting some truths from her. He is scared to death he is losing her. How could she have been so foolish as to open a horcrux. Thanks for writing. I look forward to the rest of the story. pms

Lottii posted a comment on Sunday 30th October 2011 3:57am

This is an awesome story I hope to see more in due course.

Cheers