Jayy posted a comment on Saturday 30th May 2009 3:40pm

I adored the entire scene that comprised the day of December 20, from the word "Come" and until the word "back". It was wonderful and I had a smile on my face the entire time.
Also, it was interesting to hear the wizards version of science. Most authors don't go into that, but I always like to see how wizards discover new things.

Rage and Light posted a comment on Tuesday 19th May 2009 8:56pm

very good story so far, interesting and well written, please keep it up

david

Bubblystar posted a comment on Friday 15th May 2009 7:20am

Awesome! :)
XXX

tw posted a comment on Monday 11th May 2009 4:45pm

Alright, Changed my mind.....KICK ASS!!!!

Lobing it. I am sorry if my first review was rude, that's not how I intended it to be...


This is awesome!

:D

tw posted a comment on Tuesday 5th May 2009 8:28am

ok....here's the deal....I like this story, I like your stile..but damn....

Is the pace ever going to pick up? You are being over-detailed thus far.

I admitt that I in't realize how far I'd read until I saw ch 24 at the top of this page.

I have no complaint, other than the angst is being poured out by the gallon and I don't understand why.

I really do like your story and respect your creative licence, but I guess I am just unaccustomed to the plot you are trying to wieve and the pace you have set.

good work so far, I look forward to continuing.

ARedHair posted a comment on Thursday 30th April 2009 12:54am

Great story. I'm sorry you won't be able to finish it as you may have wished. I can only hope the materials yet to be published includes an outline of how you intended the story to go and how its many threads would tie together.

I'm quite interested to learn the theory of magic Hermione has developed and whether it is correct or useful.

I wish you the best.

Lerris Smith posted a comment on Sunday 26th April 2009 2:36pm

Thank you for your excellent story. It has a depth that is seldom found. It drew me in and kept me hooked right through the last chapter. I particularly complement the richly explored idea that there was bigger problems that Voldemort. In a way Voldemort was only a symptom of the problems. The society in the story itself provided the fertile soil for his ambitions to take shape.

Wolfric posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd April 2009 2:16pm

I'm sorry, I've kind of lost the thread here. I will have to reread the story to get a bit more perspective on things. But thanks for writing and I'm also sorry to hear of your medical troubles. W.

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Tuesday 21st April 2009 11:23am

I hope you feel better soon, Mike, even though you doubt that will happen. Long-term illnesses are a pain in the seat, aren't they. This story, however, is fantastic, and I look forward eagerly to the next chapter, if it can come.

crocket posted a comment on Monday 20th April 2009 12:06am

took me some doing but finaly read all parts.I must say a very good read i prefer to read the whole story rather than coment on each section in a lot of cases as i only just found this site.hope you get better and and i hope this story continues.

nancy in chicago posted a comment on Sunday 19th April 2009 2:43pm

I like the way the will has been executed ... after all, it's realistic (for the modern audience). I've never heard of a will-reading that wasn't either fictional or on a TV show!

Thanks for this ...

nancy in chicago

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Friday 17th April 2009 2:57pm

Oh, I loved it. And I lvoed your description of Binns as an old buzzard.

trailmix posted a comment on Wednesday 8th April 2009 2:03am

Again I'm reminded why I love this story. You bring so much to these characters than I would hope for.

I was apprehensive of Hermione’s state of mind once again. Not until Harry had his conversation with Croaker that Hermione’s indignation was justified. The man truly is a bigot. Only someone with Ogden’s inclination to see the good in people, Dumbledore’s manipulative nature, and someone with the same prejudices can tolerate him. I would like to find out what they have planned for Hermione and how her recent discovery on magic will affect the wizarding world.

The meeting with the Marquis and the conversation about the oats had me in stitches. And I can’t wait till the Knights of Saint Peter have all been chosen and have their first meeting. I can just see Ron all tall proud with his title.

Once again, another proof of Dumbledore’s manipulative ways have been uncovered. I can’t figure out if he’s a good man with good intentions but made a lot of bad choices or someone who’s determined to defeat Voldemort no matter the consequences. How will Harry confront him this time?

I thought Hermione has gone off the deep end with the research books they have uncovered. The conversation she had with Harry about this showed how much they have grown as individuals. I love how their relationship has slowly progressed and has reached that level of trust both emotionally and physically. To think there was a time Hermione had difficulty being around Harry after the Voldemort attack.

I’m sorry to hear that your illness has returned Mike. I’m very thankful that you chose to share your writings even if they are still WIPs. The waiting, even if it took years, for updates were always worth it because you more than delivered with each chapter. I’ll be looking forward to the rest of the chapters. Good luck and good health to you and your family. Take Care.

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 7th April 2009 6:49pm

I am very sorry that your health is not what you should have. I hope that everything goes better for you. I will add you to my prayers. I want to thank you so much for adding to my enjoyment of the fan fiction universe of the Harry Potter Story. I have printed out this saga and I am up to 1013 pages. I understand that real life has stepped up and made your decision for you. Thank you again for sharing your tallent with those of us that appreciate you efforts. Take good care of yourself and enjoy your loved ones. God Bless you, pms

reimanr06 posted a comment on Monday 6th April 2009 2:21am

Once again, fantastic. I've been reading YoR since Ch. 1 was first released way back when, and I have to say, this is most likely the best thought out and best written fic I've ever read. It's certainly the only one I enjoy rereading. My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family. Thank you for your herculean efforts and astounding creativity.

Bedrup posted a comment on Sunday 5th April 2009 4:05am

Chapter! Outstanding. Like most of it very much. But the Harry/Hermione stuff isn ´t working for me.

callie posted a comment on Saturday 4th April 2009 9:21pm

Good chapter!!!

i'm sorry to hear that mike is sick :(

but i'm sure that you adam will do your best.

ears posted a comment on Saturday 4th April 2009 6:12pm

Thank you for the brilliant story these past five years. I hope your treatment goes well and you and your family the best.

The Midnight Poster posted a comment on Saturday 4th April 2009 5:05pm

The thing about long time between updates I have forgotten so much of the story it's like reading the whole for the first time.

Looking forward for next years update :)

noylj posted a comment on Saturday 4th April 2009 3:43pm

Please, don't make this a 45 chapter story before Harry finally realizes who he loves/cares for/lusts after. Please. It is all so silly.