Zevi posted a comment on Friday 25th November 2011 2:04am
Looks like a complete (and very fun) story to me. I'll just use my imagination for the actual do-over part. Although if you want to return to it, that would make an interesting story.
noylj posted a comment on Wednesday 12th October 2011 5:50am
Is that the story? I don't see a "next chaper".
noylj posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 7:51pm
Would be nice to update.
noahshonor posted a comment on Wednesday 1st December 2010 1:53am
Well too bad your not able too continue this. I enjoyed what there was.
uvarunr posted a comment on Monday 22nd November 2010 2:18pm
One of the funniest opening chapters to a story I've ever read - well done!
token posted a comment on Saturday 20th November 2010 7:31pm
This is one of the most entertaining and brillint one shots I've ever seen. A shame you won't continue it.
Zucht posted a comment on Tuesday 1st June 2010 2:28pm
This seems incomplete, but very interesting
ladyimmortal posted a comment on Monday 24th May 2010 7:17pm
gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 9:00am
Thanks. I'd love to read about this do-over, especially Mr Grimm's visits, but I guess they're not to be. Thanks anyway. It was a great distraction when one was sorely needed.
GinnyLover posted a comment on Wednesday 17th March 2010 5:17pm
Absolutely love this. I've read most of the stories where people take up the challenge.
Unfotunately most of them arent updated anymore.
I really do hope you will finish this. I'd love to see your take on things.
ridmania posted a comment on Monday 15th March 2010 3:16am
lol hilarious story, loved it. Great writing. Can't wait to read your next story!
Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th March 2010 5:13pm
This is well written but a waste of time, I read the story before I found out that it listed as abandon. I don't have an lot time to read a story that will never be completed, so I tend not read abandon story's or author that abandon story's. I am very sure there is a good reason why the story was abandon, but for the reader it don't matter if the reason good or not but that the story is over.
Sterling posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd March 2010 11:28pm
It's always nice to see your work. This was fun, smart and well written. Which is no suprise. I am glad you are still able to do some writing from time to time. All my best wishes for you.
Prince Charon posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd March 2010 10:14am
David posted a comment on Monday 1st March 2010 10:38pm
Glad to see a fair-handed critique of the Weasleys in there - not rose-colored glasses, but not tarring and feathering them as OMG!Evil!Using-Harry-for-his-money gits that too many H/Hr writers fall into at the least pretense. (Personally I favor neither H/Hr nor H/G - I see both as early relationships that end up as BFFs while he marries yet a different gal). And I, too, loathe the fanon conceit of soulmates. Don't care who the girl is, most depictions of soulmates/soulbonds make me want to become emo, they're so bad.
peruvianprincess posted a comment on Monday 1st March 2010 8:51pm
Entertaining as always! Thanks!
Christina Keimig posted a comment on Monday 1st March 2010 8:42pm
Oh, this was FUN! I know you've no intention of continuing it, but if you change your mind, I'm ready to read more!!! :-)
Crys posted a comment on Saturday 27th February 2010 7:48pm
*chuckle* Like the setup.
Yeah, I know this won't be continued (plenty of do-over stories w/memories already), but I like how this one went.
None of the setting or characterizations were what anyone could call "common".
>"I expect you to start a fresh series of spectacular screw-ups, of course"
Unique personality Grimm has . . .
Turned a fair few cliches on their ear.
Fun reading. Thanks for sharing.
GremlinXTJ posted a comment on Saturday 27th February 2010 9:30am
Well this was a fun, HILARIOUS little piece. Loved it.
Anthony May posted a comment on Friday 26th February 2010 9:13pm
Very enjoyable! I wish it didn't end - I would love your take on this do-over. I miss your postings. You are agreat writer!