vheritas posted a comment on Thursday 25th February 2010 1:11pm
I love this challenge - and am starting my own story - but yours is, so far and without a doubt - the best beginning I've read!
email@example.com posted a comment on Thursday 25th February 2010 12:55pm
I loved the ending of the chapter!!!! I loved your view on Soulmates too!!!
JoFarries posted a comment on Thursday 25th February 2010 11:59am
I liked it! Good original characters, good setting for the beginning. Premise is a sound one. I look forward to seeing what happens next. Nice to know Harry's focusing more on Hermione in this one. Ginny just irritates me. Looking forward to more! Jo
hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Thursday 25th February 2010 11:25am
For your tone till this point I would say Harry has the worst part of the deal anyway, don't matter what he chooses. But after all the abuse, in both worlds, I would choose to cease to exist because after the life he already had, 500 hundreds years of torture by a grim reaper seams beyond evil. I got the impression you weren't in a very good mood for this one.